**Ranpha**
Othclos
Looking up into your eyes, searching for an answer...
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 23, 2005 13:57:15 GMT -5
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Post by moongazer on Jan 23, 2005 15:02:56 GMT -5
The character girl looks really good Now all we need is a story.......
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Post by Zeithri on Jan 24, 2005 8:47:57 GMT -5
Yello! Sorry I haven't been around here for like ages.. Been playing AO for the past 3weeks now, trying to keep the organisation going with it's economic ^^ Yay! That was a really good picture of the gothic girl, but she really was a little TOO thin don't you think? I mean, that looks like a barbie-figure Except Thinner... ( how are you going to be intimate with a girl that is missing the most important place? South direction, below the Bre.. Cheast I mean Yeah you know ) I have to admit, I really ain't so much for girls with short short skirts, I prefer them to have something more warm Hehe. Come to think of it, your girl actually looks like a Moon-Girl :S That isn't neccesary a bad thing But I do like your pictures and I do wish more people could post their own drawings on how they think they should look like, so please; Feel free to draw all the characters if you wish, I don't mind ^^ I think her Necklace should resemble something about Life or Death such as the Ank, or something other magical symbol. Ofcourse her charm will also be imbuned with all her magical powers as well Don't you agree? Btw, I really like the idéa of a hairpin. Also, feel free to post large posts. That way, we can enjoy reading it longer As for the main chara-boy, I agree that he should be "normal" boring everyday person and the girl should also be kinda... boring but she will should be more Naughtier while the boy is more stand-down. He should have the White Magic and she the Black Magic. The mystery girl however should posses the ULTIMATE Magic - which ofcourse is in her necklace No, please no not Serenity. God, I hate that name. I've hated it always since I was on Dreamhack 2004 Winter and a girl walked around with a tshirt with a flower-text and it spelled "Serenity" - She was a member of a Femenim CS-Clan. Devil, I hate CS and that name. But we still need to come up with more names for the other characters, side-charaters and enemies. ....and Now, I don't have any more idéa's to say and also, Nature Calls -When you gotta go, you gotta go. Keep up the good drawings!
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Post by Adol.Christin on Jan 24, 2005 16:15:27 GMT -5
I agree with hansuke, the drawing is very good, but she's not mysterious enough for the personality. she somehow looks too happy and joyfull. she doesn't talk much about her past or why she des the thing she does, she only tell you what you need to know and that's it. and if I think of serenity, I think of the horrible and scaring dubbing of Yu-Gi-Oh!, still gives me nightmares about how they totally destroid (well nuked is more like it) the story. I though we had already some up with a name for her.
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Post by Adol.Christin on Jan 24, 2005 16:36:22 GMT -5
magnolia (real name:unknown): female, mystetrious, dressed in black leather(gothic style), has awesome magic powers (how she got them is still unknown, even to us)
main chara #1: female, cheerfull, a bit noughty from time to time, Orange long hair falls down untill cheast, childhood friens with main chara #2, develops feelings for him when his father dies (they didn't see eachother for some years since she moved with her parents)
main chara #2: male, keeps stuff to himself, brown short hair, used to dress nicely but since his father died he's a slob she tries to keep him straight, mother died when he was yung, father commited suicide 6 months ago, goes through his parents old stuff and finds a book about magic, doesn't see that she has feelings for him.
summed up some stuff and added a few idaes to keep us thinking.
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**Ranpha**
Othclos
Looking up into your eyes, searching for an answer...
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 25, 2005 7:30:45 GMT -5
LOL! I am glad you like the pic, and will work on "the most important part of the body" if you wish. About the name. I said the name to myself about 100 times, and realised I never really liked it! In my case it reminds me of Sailor Moons well known princess.... I dont know why, but I have nothing against the other sailor moon characters EXCEPT Sailor Moon, who, I dont know why, but HATE, and Princess Serenity who is the same thing as S.M. to me. Right now I am working on the boy chara. He is turning out gooooood....... Anyways, more stuff soon! P.S. If you guys liked the previous drawings, I will put up more links for my new "not-so-sketchy" works I put up on TsukiNoUsagi... Hope You like them! 1. "Were you looking for me.gif" www.tsukinousagi.net/TNU/viewthread.php?action=attachment&tid=3619&pid=642782. Free.jpg www.tsukinousagi.net/TNU/viewthread.php?action=attachment&tid=3619&pid=64284*yup, some LOTR stuff going on there... 3. ok... that one isnt working yet, but I will let you guys know when it's "ready to launch" kk. xoxo Rika
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Post by Zeithri on Jan 25, 2005 7:53:06 GMT -5
I see I see I see Ops! I will post a longer reply when I get home. Gotta go!
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**Ranpha**
Othclos
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 25, 2005 9:36:59 GMT -5
lol. Knowing you, the reply DEFINITELY will be long! And that's a good thing!
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Post by Zeithri on Jan 25, 2005 9:40:42 GMT -5
Ok, I don't agree that she should develop feelings for him. That's what everyone expect that the girl should fall in love, and that's also the most usual. Althou, real-life shows diffrent as I think it should be in this to, that the boy falls in love with the girl but she don't see / refuse to see it.
Btw, great work connecting the charas, Adol!
I'm looking forward to see your schetces on the charas, Ranpha ^^
...and that's about all I have to say for now =/
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**Ranpha**
Othclos
Looking up into your eyes, searching for an answer...
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 25, 2005 9:52:12 GMT -5
Ok, I don't agree that she should develop feelings for him. That's what everyone expect that the girl should fall in love, and that's also the most usual. Althou, real-life shows diffrent as I think it should be in this to, that the boy falls in love with the girl but she don't see / refuse to see it. Btw, great work connecting the charas, Adol! I'm looking forward to see your schetces on the charas, Ranpha ^^ ...and that's about all I have to say for now =/ Alright. about the girl/boy falling in love/having feelings for eachother thing: absolute DITTO Hansuke! I really think it should be the guy falling in love. I guess you could say that he could be like Shinji from EVA at times: kinda boy-lost-in-the-big-world thing. And how cold should the girl chara with magic powers be? like, still hanging out with the guy kind, or a COMPLETE AND UTTER loner? About the second girl chara, NO ORANGE HAIR PLEEEEEASE!! I hate orange! Yuk! except for the fruit... YUM! Maybe light blue? or like.... I dunno... red-ish? OR JUST SIMPLY BLONDE?!! Ok... I am in the squeezed lemon state again... Im working on the charas already, so expect to see some sketches tomorrow!! GOSH, I LOVE TO BE OFF SCHOOL! ahhh! anyways. I gots to go! one question: If im gonna do the evil charas, what clothes/ style should they have? thnx. xoxo rika
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Post by Zeithri on Jan 25, 2005 18:25:20 GMT -5
Haha, maybe your right I think the girl should be a social-person, while the guy is not. What do you think? Haha, no problem. No orange hair Oh, redhead ey? Love that haircolor on girls ^^.. Especially if they also are Asian but that is oftopic Scetches tomorrow? That is G-R-E-A-T! Looking forward to The villians, huh? Good question. It should ceratinly be the classical long hair style ofcourse, and I think it either should be white OR black, but mostly white for 101% Their style should be... Evilish, If I'm not mistaking we haven't worked that much with the villians, but I might be mistaking.. Oh yeah, the mystical girl. Her ultimate magic should be some kind of meta-morphis I think. That is it that is in her necklece. The spell will have a counterpart and that is what the villian will have - Another kind of Meta-Morphis but weaker version... Now, NOW I got an Idéa! Think of it, the mystical girl and the evil villian - Both with diffrent magical powers but that the villian posseses stronger ones but cannot manifest them correctly, while the mystical girl has weaker magic BUT can manifest them twice as good and thus become even more powerfull then it ever supposed to be. Do you see where I'm heading?! If not, read what I've marked as SPOILER here: =~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~ S.P.O.I.L.E.R. ---------------------------------- Main chara boy + Main chara girl = Powerfull Magics Main villian + mystical girl = "Godlike" Conclusion: They are the predessesors of our main charas! The Villian posseses Meta-Morphis "Angel" - White type The Myst.Grl posseses Meta-Morphis "Deamon" - Black type The only things that differs from Villian & Myst.Grl from Chara boy & Chara girl is that it is reveresed. In this timeline the boy is the white-controller, in the timeline before the villian is the black-controller and girls swaped to. Do you understand my point? Then you might think: "Why don't he have 'Deamon' then?" Because, it is natural. What is white has a black side and what is black has a white side. That's why. Agree with me if you like this idéa I do however ---------------------------------- .R.E.L.I.O.P.S =~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~ That's it for now, post more folks!
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**Ranpha**
Othclos
Looking up into your eyes, searching for an answer...
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 26, 2005 6:33:31 GMT -5
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**Ranpha**
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 26, 2005 6:38:19 GMT -5
Ok... am I banned from the forum yet? I AM SO TERRIBLY SORRY THE PIC IS SO ULTIMATELY HUGGGGEEE!! We should write like crazy, so that we get onto the next page, and the format of the page is back to normal! kk, sorry again!
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**Ranpha**
Othclos
Looking up into your eyes, searching for an answer...
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 26, 2005 6:41:42 GMT -5
Decided to put up the link for the group SKETCH anyway... cant stand the suspense... I left some space on the top for the title of the whole thing. You guys DO remember we need a title, right? here's the pic. www.tsukinousagi.net/TNU/viewthread.php?action=attachment&tid=3619&pid=64349I am open for critisism! * I like the main chara guy mor eon this sketch rather than on the group pic. Your decision*
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Post by Zeithri on Jan 26, 2005 9:37:18 GMT -5
Yeah, that's the mystical girl alright! GREAT WORK, Ranpha! You really managed to capture her spirit in those pictures, I belive ^^ Keep up the wonderfull work! Who is the villian girl? Is it the mystic girl because they weren't so similiar to each other, but still, that is really a great drawing of those. I really like the drawing of the villian-boy, try drawing him with leather jacket ( Neo style example ). Or try a Robe of somekind or whateverelse good and "evil" clothes. I'm confident that you will make it great! I also like that you gave the mainchara-boy a Time necklace, that gives the image that he can manipulate time which is my next question; How many would like him to manipulate time? Not as stopping it, but slowing it down? Otherwise it could likewise be his fathers watch that he wears as a necklace? Let's play boll with the idea for a while ^^ Hehe, the maingirl in the window kinda looks like "Snowwhite" or something ^^ but the characters are great! Let's keep them that way, but perhaps change some of their clothes. If you don't mind? First of all, you don't need to worry about Mystic Girl, she is done and is great. Cannot grat you enough for that great work but perhaps add a magical cape that she wears from time to time? Try scething it The mainchara girl, I think they she first will wear a blous and jeans or something similiar - later on she will change her clothe style to something more... Hm.... Not punkish not gothish.. Something more customable clothes....baah... The mainchara boy, is fine. Looks like one of those who can charm girls, he should change later on to more.. Adventurer style I think, or what do you think? You'll do I great job once again What name it should have is a great question, it's T-H-E question. We should name this as it would recemble our characters and their powers they use, it should sound good but not to great, not great but not to bad. You would like enjoying to say that word. Currently, I'm working on the "Prolouge" or "Intro" to our upcomming Anime/Manga that hopefully, when done, some big company WILL make which is the main purpose for all of this. To do something we enjoy. I dunno what you want but I would very much become a Mecha-Designer ( althou I really need to pratice MUCH more ) so this might turn up to be a "foot-in-the-business" for us all, so to speak. I really have good confident that someone will publish our work, aren't you? ^^ Some name suggestions ---------------------------- Villian_Male Name: Caerimonia ( Holiness on Latin ) Alternativ Name: Augustus ( Holy on Latin ) Main_Chara_Male Name: Lien Kamoto Main_Chara_Female Name: Merus Uzaka ( Merus means Pure on Latin ) Well? However, I do think that the Villian should have a name that means Holy or something similiar in his name.
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Post by Zeithri on Jan 26, 2005 9:48:30 GMT -5
( EDIT BUTTON MALFUNCTION.... or rather, prefer this double post rather then edit ) Sorry, I forgot the last pic of the groupshot , you don't need to change the style of the Maingirl chara, it was so I wanted it to look like ^^ ( eg. the pic where it says "Title Here" ). hehe, but don't you think that she has really long legs against her short body? Shorten her left by 1/4 or 2/4 and it should be perfect That is all for now again Great Job!
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**Ranpha**
Othclos
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 26, 2005 13:59:23 GMT -5
ok. I have 10 minutes, so here I go. 1st thing: Thanks Hansuke! I really tried hard this time I still don't understand though: DO you want me to work on the guy, OR DONT you? And how about the EVIL girl? *the one with white/grey hair* Oh PLEASE can we keep her!? She will be BA-A-AD I promise! I just LOVE her, lol! But I am glad you like the guy... I certainly do *drool* But that's a bit off-topic About the robe thing. To be truly honest, I just didn't draw it, cos it takes up SO MUCH TIME! Im sorry, but otherwise there would probably have been one less pics! And how does the girl look like snow-white? It's not that i dont agree, i just dont understand! Now explain: how many main chara girls do we have? 2? or only the mysterious girl?? Cos NOW I am completely confused and ready to bang my small little head on the wall!! n_n About the villains again: i kinda did a brother/sister duo kinda thing. Maybe you will disagree, but maybe we can still keep the girl for another part? I just lo-o-ove the hair... lol soz Ok, Hansuke GREAT job on the names! ^_^ I would go for Augustus for the Villain boy. Cos the first one sounds more of a female name. Maybe we can use it for the other white-haired/villain girl? n_n I love the main chara names as well, but I would think something else rather than Uzaka for the last name. I dont know, also oriental, but maybe also with a meaning to it? Hansuke, as you are good at this, i think you should have a go! And btw, does Lien mean anything? just wondering ^^ Alrighty-oh. I have no more stuff to say. Thanks for the comments H.! I will try to *work on it* lol! kk. xoxo Rika (by the way. Seldane suggested that I actually change my name to rika, so i might do that soon, so dont be surprised to see me on under a different name! ^^ oh, and thanks for fixing the problem Seldane! with the pic and all!)
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Post by Adol.Christin on Jan 26, 2005 17:07:25 GMT -5
ok I'll start with the good guys: magnolia: is great, maybe do some subtle changes later on.
male hero: on the second group pic (with the title space) he is a lot more the way I would like to see him.
female hero: I liked her a lot better in the window pic, maybe is a good idea to give her a skirt instead of jeans.
bad guys:
female: I like her, but you might wanna change her eyes a bit. in manga/anime evil female chara usually have small eyes. and the good guys have big eyes. (this has to to with the idea that the eyes are a tool to look into the soul of a person)
male: i like him, shouldn't change his face/body. indeed give him a lether "motorbike" jacket.
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Post by Adol.Christin on Jan 26, 2005 17:18:32 GMT -5
Ok, I don't agree that she should develop feelings for him. That's what everyone expect that the girl should fall in love, and that's also the most usual. Althou, real-life shows diffrent as I think it should be in this to, that the boy falls in love with the girl but she don't see / refuse to see it. in most anime it's that the boy is in love with the popular girl and she thinks he's a nerd and in the end they do find true love. so I made the twist on the old tale. but if you wanna change it ok, then I was thinking about the following: his dad did die, and he was all depressed and stuf, she helps him out a bit with getting back up on his feet, she even moves in with him (still just friends). while living under the same roof they develop mutual feelings (i wa thinking that onesides is as korny as ever). that will be it for now. its 11:13 pm so time for nighty night time
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Post by Zeithri on Jan 26, 2005 18:20:34 GMT -5
Haha, sure. I was actually kinda fond of the other villian girl Hm, let's make it that she is his... Hm.... WAit, now I get a hang of it! Augustus thinks that the girl wanted him because she was fond / in love. But the truth is that the girl is a Goddess in search of the Necklaces for reasons unknown. Maybe best for humanity, maybe for conquer purposes. ( Her purpose and what she is should be kept a secret until the last struggle, althou Magnolia did know who she was all the time ) When combining the two necklaces, the bearers powers will reach above the ones of a Titan! ( and as you know, Titans was more powerfull then the Gods ) Well, when she stands there in the window it looks like she is waiting for the 7dwarfs to come home and do something....6.... like cleaning the house or something It looks similiar to that window ^^ Let's sumarize the names: Villian (Main) : Augustus Villian (Goddess) : Caerimonia Character Male: Lien Kamoto ( The name Lien is a result of to much AO playing. Lien one similiar dressed as Death, also a Skeleton ) Character Female: Merus Takakari Any objections to the names? I do object alittle to Lien, but I need to think about it. But the others? No, I don't think you need to work more on the charas for now LOOOL! -"I will try to *work on it*"- just so you know, I like it when you talk dirty LOOL!!! I like your idea Adol! Let's go with it, it does sound great! That is all for now. I'll try to finish the Proloug by tomorrow. Here it is 00:16..... ehh, Night time Catch you later!
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