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Post by Adol.Christin on Jan 27, 2005 7:50:19 GMT -5
then I'll start working out the details more of the main hero's past. so that we can flash back to it once in a while in the sotry. and I'll think of a good way that Lien and Marus will meet Magnolia. I was think about a transfer student from someplace (since it's a high/collegeschool show), and she transferred there because she had a lead on the main villains hideout
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Post by Zeithri on Jan 30, 2005 6:42:12 GMT -5
Really? I thought of her more as an adult
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 30, 2005 10:47:07 GMT -5
ok guys. I am sorry i havent been on much... U could call it a family prob... BIG family prob... *sigh* Anyway... I started sketching some scenes from the actual anime/manga And what happened to the part funny anime? I cant imagine anuthing funny except if Magnolia smaks the guy... a lot... ah, SOMETHING I WOULD DO!! Anyways. Not much stuff to say. I would say no to the time necklace... Sorry H! I just think the story becomes too... heavy... I definitely say yes to the goddess part (although when you say Villian (goddess) it kinda gives away that she is a bad-ass chara So I will go and *work on it* (lol!!! H!! ... welllll, I actually kinda like this *dirty me* HEHE! JK! ) Good job on the chara relationships Adol! I have no disagreements so far... But I think the girl should be the same age group as the guys... AGAIN sorry H... A-a-anyways...! Toodles my dears, haha! xoxo Rika
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Post by Adol.Christin on Jan 30, 2005 13:08:51 GMT -5
I was also thinking about that and I think its better if she does has a different background then our main chara. I was thinking that our two hero's got in to the same university together and magnolia is now in her 2nd her and she shows a group of new students the way around the campus. or maybe she would be some sort of guidance councellor.
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Post by Zeithri on Jan 31, 2005 4:33:13 GMT -5
Haha. I was more thinking that she is the predesessor to the main characters, thats why I can't see her at the same age =/
Currently working on the prolouge but right now..... it kinda... I think I need to re-write it some more times. I'll post further on, no more comments at this time ^^
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Post by Adol.Christin on Jan 31, 2005 8:54:17 GMT -5
That wasn't quite in my mind, because since magnolia is "hot" there could be some relationship problems because of her. (the main hero girl thinks she looks "ugly" next to her and that he will leave her and stuff) so that's why I want to be them the same age. but she still has this mysterious illnes and dies along the way because of it. then she give her necklace to the two new hero's
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Post by **Ranpha** on Jan 31, 2005 10:54:01 GMT -5
Hm... Well... I have no idea what to say. I have done some pics, but ONCE AGAIN I dont have time to post them. I already warned you guys that I wont be on AS MUCH starting, well, today ^^ *sighs, drops on the bed* Well, keep working you guys. This is basically to let you know that I am still alive and working... ^^ And can someone please give me a full profile of Magnolia, cos I am getting quite confused... Alrighty oh! Nothing else! xoxo Rika (yup, still didnt change my name ^_^)
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Post by **Ranpha** on Feb 1, 2005 11:18:30 GMT -5
Well, I am back with my first ever photoshop pic. Sorry for the blanks and all, but i tried my best on this "detailed sketch" Ok then. Here we are: www.tsukinousagi.net/TNU/viewthread.php?action=attachment&tid=3619&pid=64721and btw. About the magnolia/guy/ main chara girl thing... who gets feelings for whom??? Guy for Magi or the girl??? alrighty oh.. hope to get reviews back soon ^_^ xoxo Rika (Kristen)
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Post by Adol.Christin on Feb 1, 2005 15:29:10 GMT -5
I'm not sure about it myself in what depth that relation develops profile Magnolia: Girl, 21, place of birth Okinawa, currently studing (unkown what classes, we need to find something fitting) at Tokyo University (lives on the campus), she has the biggest chest area of all girls in the series, has some serious illnes that she keeps to herself until the very end of her life, got long black hair, mysterious pendant/necklace around her neck. I think that's what we got on her until now...
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Post by **Ranpha** on Feb 2, 2005 10:42:32 GMT -5
First of all thank you for clearing up the Magnolia thing for me. ^_^ So now I am guessing that the other girl begins having feelings for the guy... I would go with mutual feelings, BUT (there is always a but ^^) I would say that the guy develops something for the girl FIRST and then the girl (coming closer to the end) also realises she actually loves him. *aw, sounds so amazingly sweet, lol ^_^* BTW> Hansuke, your senseless rambeling about you likeing redheads *JK ^^ * actually inspired me to draw a red head for the series, so MAYBE you might want to substitute the current gal for the new one! And please tell me, does the other girl (blonde/red haired) have magic powers? We should keep track of what we have like Hansuke does after each of his posts (most of the time ^_^). I never actuallu get around to do that cos I always have to run!! ^^ And here we are again! Gotta blast you guys! Well, nothing else to add! Bye! xoxoxoxo Rika
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Post by Adol.Christin on Feb 3, 2005 5:05:25 GMT -5
Character Female: Merus Takakari
female, cheerfull, a bit noughty from time to time, Orange long hair falls down untill cheast, childhood friens with main chara #2, develops feelings for him when his father dies (they didn't see eachother for some years since she moved with her parents at age 8) but now they meet again on the tokyo U campus, they have the same classes. she has (like the guy) have magic powers (white), but they do not realize they have them until something hap[ens when they meet magnolia. when she is together with the guy, they both can develop huge magic powers, but need to learn how to control them (magnolia teaches them).
next time the guy...
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Post by **Ranpha** on Feb 3, 2005 16:12:36 GMT -5
Well, not much to say... I got some stuff I will be able to paste tomorrow! Two or more pics, for SURE ^_^ I know it took long, but I will be free for the next week (AGAIN ^^) so I will be busy! But... i think we discussed my horrifying fear of orange hair, so I actually made a VERY CUTE character with red hair! I think you'll like her, but it's utterly up to you ^^ BTW, I love the profiles so far. EVERYTHING but the orange hair. ^^ So anyways, after you are done with Lien (or whatever you... we decide his name to be ) why dont you start with the "Evil, bad-ass charas"? I dont mean to put pressure on you, but i think we better get started on them! Alrighty then! I better get started! xoxoxoxoxo Rika P.S. Is Hansuke ditching us?!?!?! LOL!
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Post by **Ranpha** on Feb 4, 2005 6:29:53 GMT -5
Wait.... just heard the story of Hansuke's PC breaking down in the middle of a very long message.... I know I can't do anything to help, but first of all... *gives H a hug* and second of all, it happened to me 3 times , and I was ready to THROW my comp at the wall, but then I decided, better not, and you know, just summarized the whole thing I was gonna write Just to let you know you are not alone ^_^ KK, good luck xoxoxoxo Rika
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Post by Zeithri on Feb 4, 2005 11:17:18 GMT -5
1. Well it didn't BREAK Down, the where a power shortage 2. No Offense but, I've been surviving without hugs for about 16 years and now 2 years more, so I think I survive 3. I disagree once more, we said first that they should have; Boy - White. Girl - Black / magic. 4. O la la, a Redhead girl ^^ 5. Yes, please write what YOU feel. Not what the General public wants to see (eg. Adols version of BIG BREASTED womans) 6. Another reason for not writing earlier, I started watching Full Metal Alchemist ^^ 7. Btw, how did you found out about the power shortage Ranpha? :S 8. This is the End of this post, Tune in for more posts next time, same thred. Secret 9. Arturus ( or what the name was again, don't orka to look again ^^ ) Age: 22 Hair color: White Magic Powers: Black Description: Once a Decent guy. Found out one day ( age 13 ) that he was one of the Awakened ( Magic Capable ). At Age 15, he meets Magnolia - another Awakened. They team up and help each other. Later they fall in love. Their parents are very understanding of their love... And powers.. One day, they are entrusted with two magical Necklaces but they are not allowed to use the full potential of the necklace, only as magical-enhancers and only in emergency cases they are allowed to use the full potential. They accept, curious what the powers are but not using. A month later, they decide to go into the forest and set up a tent and get *caugh caugh* cozy. However, when they lie next to the fire and looks at the stars, monsters attacks them. Magnolia gets a cut below the neck. This enrages Arturus who destorys the rest of the monsters. When he looks at her cut, one of the dying monsters focus his eyes at Arturus who noticed he is being watched and looks straight into the dying monster. He get's feared of what his mind is telling him. He tells Magnolia that they must hurry home 'cause he has a feeling something terrible has happend. They rush through the forest and when they get home, they see their Village in flames, their family slaughtered brutaly. This takes a giant toll of pain in their heart, while Magnolia is able to sustain some sort of calm, Arturus gets furious. He cannot controll himself, and when Magnolia tries to get him undercontroll, he snapps. He slapps her to the ground and says "How can you be so ignorant?? Whom ever did this, I will destory! They will not get away with it!". He start running away from the village, crying. The anger and hatred inside of him grows larger and he utilieses the power of the Necklace. He metamorphises to a ArchAngel* and heads to the enemies hideout, slaughtering everyone. But the damage was already done, he had utiliesed forbidden powers and it was bound to bring trubble of all kinds. Everything from Thugs to Divine. And Magnolia, well when he returned he was changed and dumped her because what he done. After that, she grows to this strong person with a strong dedication to keep the world safe... Or something like that I think that they, when they remeet will get shocked. Like if they thought that the other one died. Eg. Magnolia thinks Arturus died later because of something, while he thinks she moved to live a safe life. Let's work on it ok? NOTE, the * are things that might change if you not agree or find a better term. But that is our story to write more about ;P
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Post by **Ranpha** on Feb 4, 2005 14:06:10 GMT -5
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Post by **Ranpha** on Feb 5, 2005 3:41:02 GMT -5
Heya Thanx MP83!! I really appreciate it.. As you may guess i was busy! (lol, can pretty much imagine my face expression: pure shock ) And about seeing those characters in an anime or manga.... well, seeing as this is the whole point of this (besides having fun ), i sure hope so!! lol Anyways, thanx again and hopefully some more opinions on those sketches! kk, xoxo Rika PS i am leaving for the week to ski so i might not be on much (or at all ^_^) but promise you guys i will keep sketchin' every evening!
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Post by Zeithri on Feb 5, 2005 5:26:37 GMT -5
Please, you're doing a fine job. Take some rest of Great pictures as usuall! ^^ Don't worry, I like the schetces so you really don't need to rush-to-color them And also I like the idea that it's her sister that died because that brings another idea up. Her Parents is Dead, they died some time ago when she was very little ( age 3-5 ). So she starts living with her big sister in that village. Later she meets Agustus and you can read about what happens higher up. ... not quite sure about what I'm thinkin here right now ^^ I think I'm still asleep somehow. MP83, well it's easy. Just come up with ideas and post them ^^ Have fun on your trip, Ranpha ^^
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Post by **Ranpha** on Feb 5, 2005 5:35:41 GMT -5
Haha, thnx Hansuke I would take some rest off, but art is basically the air I breathe! I will keep sketching until I cant move What you said about the sister is exactly what I had in my mind, so I am glad we agree on that. Whereas for Augustus's family, I say he had his mother+father+a tiny sister (that expains the pain he is in) Anyway, just keep working on the story.^_^ Well, I better start packing for that ski-trip *daydreams of the slopes* ahhh xoxo Rika ps about that hug again... *clears her voice* *acts manly* Dude, I really didnt mean it. Hope we are still ok, man... Heh, never thought I would ever say that!
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Post by Adol.Christin on Feb 5, 2005 13:32:36 GMT -5
I saw the mistake I made with the girl ^^
Character Female: Merus Takakari
female, cheerfull, a bit noughty from time to time, Orange long hair falls down untill cheast, childhood friens with main chara #2, develops feelings for him when his father dies (they didn't see eachother for some years since she moved with her parents at age 8) but now they meet again on the tokyo U campus, they have the same classes. she has (like the guy) have magic powers (Black), but they do not realize they have them until something happens when they meet magnolia. when she is together with the guy, they both can develop huge magic powers, but need to learn how to control them (magnolia teaches them).
as for a comment on the pics, they are good. but I thought we were creating a manga, not an anime. manga can be selfpublished (I know a doushinji circle in the netherlands, who maybe can help us publish). they also have connections to the famous ComiKet in Japan, so if we can make it billangual (english and japanese) we can also take it there. wouldn't that be cool?
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Post by Zeithri on Feb 6, 2005 7:06:35 GMT -5
About the Manga & Anime. ADol, would you really like to draw ALL pictures yourself? Not to mention the Storyboard and then send it past n' forth all the time? Are you good at drawing Manga? Should we throw all that huge work on just one person? As I wrote in the beginning of this thred, it was a story-upcomming project that we would later send to manga companies to see if they wanted the story, and let them DRAW it. We would only draw the characters and make the story. But what you say, I must agree forcefully, is a great idea. But my skills at drawing sucks literary, however I do With other words, I should perhaps start using the "How to draw Manga - Volume 1 - Compiling Characters.pdf" tutorial I downloaded ^_^ To much free time on hands. But this also expands our project even more! And we certainly need more people to help us with it. Especially people who has a eye for great viewpoints, those will do the storyboard for each "episode". So basically this is what we need: <list> <li>Storyboard Drawers <li>Assistance Drawers <li>Translators ( We can translate it to a lot of diffrent languages, such as English, Japanese, Neatherlands & Swedish ) </list> So if we are going to draw it as our OWN Manga, then we would need such help. MP83, I'm certain that you can help us with Storyboard or Translation Now, it's time for votes! Do you actually think this is a great Idea? Yes or No. If you want to join up, please write what you want to help with. Also, all members of this should consider to use MSN Messenger for quick contact and sending of files. Mine is: One_Forte@hotmail.com Feel free to add me even if this will be a No I vote Yes.
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